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IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02
review-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02-artart-lc-fenton-2025-05-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2025-05-27
Requested 2025-05-13
Authors Christer Holmberg , Nevenka Biondic , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Roland Jesske
I-D last updated 2025-11-19 (Latest revision 2025-08-13)
Completed reviews Artart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Jim Fenton (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Xiao Min (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jim Fenton
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/a8nmDaxtiOkmLqehnZ1RdXa9aWI
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-05-26
review-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02-artart-lc-fenton-2025-05-26-00
I am the designated ARTART reviewer for this draft.

This document is well written and appears to be ready for publication as an
Informational RFC.

Minor issue: I would prefer if the New Text in Section 3 used normative terms
(probably MAY in most cases) for consistency with IETF style. However, the way
it is written is consistent with the wording in Section 5.7 of RFC7315, so this
may be a reason to stick with the current "can" wording. Presumably none of the
named header fields are mandatory in any of the named requests and responses;
if some are, more precise normative terminology is needed.