IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02
review-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02-artart-lc-fenton-2025-05-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
| Deadline | 2025-05-27 | |
| Requested | 2025-05-13 | |
| Authors | Christer Holmberg , Nevenka Biondic , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Roland Jesske | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-11-19 (Latest revision 2025-08-13) | |
| Completed reviews |
Artart IETF Last Call review of -02
by Jim Fenton
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Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Xiao Min (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Daniel Migault (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jim Fenton |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/a8nmDaxtiOkmLqehnZ1RdXa9aWI | |
| Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2025-05-26 |
review-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-02-artart-lc-fenton-2025-05-26-00
I am the designated ARTART reviewer for this draft. This document is well written and appears to be ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Minor issue: I would prefer if the New Text in Section 3 used normative terms (probably MAY in most cases) for consistency with IETF style. However, the way it is written is consistent with the wording in Section 5.7 of RFC7315, so this may be a reason to stick with the current "can" wording. Presumably none of the named header fields are mandatory in any of the named requests and responses; if some are, more precise normative terminology is needed.