Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-09
review-ietf-stir-passport-09-genart-lc-even-2016-12-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-11-01
Requested 2016-10-20
Authors Chris Wendt , Jon Peterson
I-D last updated 2018-06-15 (Latest revision 2017-02-09)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-passport by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-12-05
review-ietf-stir-passport-09-genart-lc-even-2016-12-05-00
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Document:  draft-ietf-stir-passport-09

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016-10-27

IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-1

IESG Telechat date:  2016-11-3

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

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Nits/editorial comments:

I noticed that the in the IANA section the security consideration for the
passport subtype reference RFC7515 yet the security section (10) of this
document does not mention RFC7515. Why is that?