Updates to X.509 Policy Validation
draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-05
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2024-08-30
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(System) | Received changes through RFC Editor sync (changed state to RFC, created became rfc relationship between draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph and RFC 9618, changed IESG state to RFC … Received changes through RFC Editor sync (changed state to RFC, created became rfc relationship between draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph and RFC 9618, changed IESG state to RFC Published) |
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2024-08-27
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05 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to AUTH48-DONE |
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2024-08-16
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05 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to TI from AUTH48 |
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2024-08-02
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05 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to AUTH48 from RFC-EDITOR |
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2024-07-15
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05 | Carlos Pignataro | Closed request for Last Call review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
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2024-07-15
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05 | Carlos Pignataro | Assignment of request for Last Call review by OPSDIR to Nagendra Nainar was marked no-response |
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2024-03-28
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05 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to RFC-EDITOR from EDIT |
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2024-02-15
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05 | Tero Kivinen | Closed request for Last Call review by SECDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
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2024-02-15
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05 | Tero Kivinen | Assignment of request for Last Call review by SECDIR to Ivaylo Petrov was marked no-response |
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2024-02-02
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05 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to No IANA Actions from In Progress |
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2024-02-02
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05 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to EDIT |
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2024-02-02
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05 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
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2024-02-02
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05 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
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2024-02-01
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05 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
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2024-02-01
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05 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
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2024-02-01
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05 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
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2024-02-01
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05 | Cindy Morgan | IESG has approved the document |
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2024-02-01
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05 | Cindy Morgan | Closed "Approve" ballot |
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2024-02-01
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05 | Cindy Morgan | Ballot approval text was generated |
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2024-02-01
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05 | Roman Danyliw | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
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2024-02-01
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05 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-05.txt |
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2024-02-01
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05 | (System) | New version approved |
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2024-02-01
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05 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: David Benjamin |
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2024-02-01
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05 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |
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2024-02-01
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04 | Jean Mahoney | Request closed, assignment withdrawn: Pete Resnick Last Call GENART review |
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2024-02-01
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04 | Jean Mahoney | Closed request for Last Call review by GENART with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
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2024-02-01
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04 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation |
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2024-02-01
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04 | Andrew Alston | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Andrew Alston |
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2024-01-31
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04 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
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2024-01-31
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04 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot comment] Thanks for the clear document and action. NIT: I would probably move Section 6.5 to 6.1, as that seems to be the most … [Ballot comment] Thanks for the clear document and action. NIT: I would probably move Section 6.5 to 6.1, as that seems to be the most efficient and simple mitigation to apply. |
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2024-01-31
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04 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Paul Wouters |
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2024-01-31
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04 | Martin Duke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Martin Duke |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot comment] I am balloting NoObj in the "this is way outside my area of expertise, but I sure do like the font you selected" … [Ballot comment] I am balloting NoObj in the "this is way outside my area of expertise, but I sure do like the font you selected" sense of the term. |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Warren Kumari |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Jim Guichard | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jim Guichard |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Francesca Palombini | [Ballot comment] Thank you for the work on this document. Many thanks to Martin Thomson for his ART ART review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/bskZp76k4VtHqThOqLYapIGxAxc/ and to the authors … [Ballot comment] Thank you for the work on this document. Many thanks to Martin Thomson for his ART ART review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/bskZp76k4VtHqThOqLYapIGxAxc/ and to the authors for addressing it. |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Francesca Palombini | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Francesca Palombini |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot comment] Thanks for working on this specification. I have no comments from transport protocol point of view. |
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2024-01-30
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04 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
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2024-01-29
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04 | John Scudder | [Ballot comment] Thanks for this well-written document. I can’t say that I spent enough time with the algorithm to be able to vouch for its … [Ballot comment] Thanks for this well-written document. I can’t say that I spent enough time with the algorithm to be able to vouch for its correctness myself, but that’s what subject matter area reviewers are for. I sincerely hope that lamps is considering, or will consider, a bis of RFC 5280. It seems to me that the material in this document deserves to be incorporated directly into the base specification, instead of sitting in an update document that a naïve reader could accidentally miss. The same is true of some of the other updates. But this is just me editorializing, I don’t expect any changes to the present document. I have one question, and a couple nits. In the example associated with 5.3 (d)(2), should there be some language telling me why bronze doesn’t appear in the figure, although gold and silver do? Nits: - in “If either (1) the value of explicit_policy variable is greater than zero”, it looks as though a definite article is needed there, i.e. “If either (1) the value of the explicit_policy variable is greater than zero”. (Removing the word “variable” would also make it grammatical.) - s/ertificate/certificate/ |
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2024-01-29
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04 | John Scudder | Ballot comment text updated for John Scudder |
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2024-01-29
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04 | John Scudder | [Ballot comment] Thanks for this well-written document. I can’t say that I spent enough time with the algorithm to be able to vouch for its … [Ballot comment] Thanks for this well-written document. I can’t say that I spent enough time with the algorithm to be able to vouch for its correctness myself, but that’s what subject matter area reviewers are for. I sincerely hope that lamps is considering, or will consider, a bis of RFC 5280. It seems to me that the material in this document deserves to be incorporated directly into the base specification, instead of sitting in an update document that a naïve reader could accidentally miss. The same is true of some of the other updates. But this is just me editorializing, I don’t expect any changes to the present document. I have one question, and a couple nits. In the example associated with 5.3 (d)(2), should there be some language telling me why bronze doesn’t appear in the figure, although gold and silver do? Nits: - “If either (1) the value of explicit_policy variable is greater than zero” — it looks as though a definite article is needed there, i.e. “If either (1) the value of the explicit_policy variable is greater than zero”. (Removing the word “variable” would also make it grammatical.) - s/ertificate/certificate/ |
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2024-01-29
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04 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for John Scudder |
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2024-01-29
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04 | Robert Wilton | [Ballot comment] Hi David, Thanks for writing this document. I'm not an expert in this area but found the description of both the problem being … [Ballot comment] Hi David, Thanks for writing this document. I'm not an expert in this area but found the description of both the problem being addressed and the overview of the solution to mitigate it to be clear and easy to understand. Regards, Rob |
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2024-01-29
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04 | Robert Wilton | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Robert Wilton |
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2024-01-29
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04 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot comment] Congratulations both for the draft and for the speed: one year before first draft and IESG evaluation ! |
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2024-01-29
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04 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Éric Vyncke |
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2024-01-28
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04 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Amanda Baber | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2024-02-01 |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | Ballot has been issued |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | Created "Approve" ballot |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead |
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2024-01-25
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04 | Roman Danyliw | Ballot writeup was changed |
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2024-01-25
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04 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
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2024-01-17
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04 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
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2024-01-17
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04 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-04.txt |
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2024-01-17
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04 | (System) | New version approved |
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2024-01-17
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04 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: David Benjamin |
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2024-01-17
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04 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |
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2024-01-17
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03 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from IANA - Review Needed |
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2024-01-17
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03 | David Dong | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-03, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-03, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We understand that this document doesn't require any registry actions. While it's often helpful for a document's IANA Considerations section to remain in place upon publication even if there are no actions, if the authors strongly prefer to remove it, we do not object. If this assessment is not accurate, please respond as soon as possible. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist |
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2024-01-12
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03 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Ivaylo Petrov |
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2024-01-11
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03 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Nagendra Nainar |
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2024-01-11
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03 | Martin Thomson | Request for Last Call review by ARTART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Martin Thomson. Sent review to list. |
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2024-01-11
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03 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Pete Resnick |
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2024-01-11
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03 | Barry Leiba | Request for Last Call review by ARTART is assigned to Martin Thomson |
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2024-01-08
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03 | Cindy Morgan | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
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2024-01-08
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03 | Cindy Morgan | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-01-22): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph@ietf.org, housley@vigilsec.com, lamps-chairs@ietf.org, rdd@cert.org, spasm@ietf.org … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-01-22): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph@ietf.org, housley@vigilsec.com, lamps-chairs@ietf.org, rdd@cert.org, spasm@ietf.org Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (Updates to X.509 Policy Validation) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the Limited Additional Mechanisms for PKIX and SMIME WG (lamps) to consider the following document: - 'Updates to X.509 Policy Validation' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2024-01-22. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document updates RFC 5280 to replace the algorithm for X.509 policy validation with an equivalent, more efficient algorithm. The original algorithm built a structure which scaled exponentially in the worst case, leaving implementations vulnerable to denial-of- service attacks. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph/ The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6053/ |
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2024-01-08
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03 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
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2024-01-08
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03 | Cindy Morgan | Last call announcement was generated |
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2024-01-05
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03 | Roman Danyliw | Last call was requested |
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2024-01-05
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03 | Roman Danyliw | Last call announcement was generated |
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2024-01-05
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03 | Roman Danyliw | Ballot approval text was generated |
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2024-01-05
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03 | Roman Danyliw | Ballot writeup was generated |
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2024-01-05
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03 | Roman Danyliw | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
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2024-01-05
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03 | (System) | Changed action holders to Roman Danyliw (IESG state changed) |
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2024-01-05
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03 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
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2024-01-05
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03 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-03.txt |
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2024-01-05
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03 | David Benjamin | New version approved |
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2024-01-05
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: David Benjamin |
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2024-01-05
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03 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |
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2024-01-05
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02 | Roman Danyliw | AD Review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/spasm/qeCPu2D9Nt9nPboewff_UPhpndA/ |
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2024-01-05
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02 | (System) | Changed action holders to Roman Danyliw, David Benjamin (IESG state changed) |
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2024-01-05
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02 | Roman Danyliw | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from Publication Requested |
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2023-12-12
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02 | Jenny Bui | Document shepherd changed to Russ Housley |
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2023-12-12
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02 | Jenny Bui | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with … # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? There is support in the LAMPS WG for this document. It eliminates the vulnerabilities like [CVE-2023-0464] and [CVE-2023-23524]. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was little controversy, and suggested improvements were readily accepted by the authors. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one has threatened an appeal; however, one concern was raised during WG Last Call that should be highlighted. As written, this document is not stand alone. It makes changes to the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280. There is a concern that future updates to RFC 5280 will conflict with these updates. The person that raised these concerns would prefer an update to RFC 5280 that completely replaces Section 6 and is written as a set of editing instructions to be made against Section 6 of RFC 5280. The person that raised this concern was able to convince one other LAMPS WG participant, but the LAMPS WG Chairs determined that they were in the rough. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? There has been some code written, including at least one implementation of the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280 that was updated to the algorithm in this document. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No concerns about interaction with other technologies. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No special reviews are needed. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? This document does not include a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No formal language is used.. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? No concerns were noticed. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? As reflected in the Datatracker: Proposed Standard on the IETF Stream. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The authors have explicitly stated that he is unaware of any IPR that needs to be declared. A third part disclosure was made: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6053/. However, this seems to be related to getting time from GPS, which is not a topic discussed in the Internet-Draft. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) IDnits offers the following complaint: ~~~ The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. (See the Legal Provisions document at https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) ~~~ As an author of RFC 5280, I do not see how this concern applies to this update. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No concerns. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All references are freely available. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. There are no downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this document will not change the status of any other document. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No updates to any IANA registries are needed. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No new IANA registries are needed. |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | Responsible AD changed to Roman Danyliw |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
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2023-12-09
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02 | Russ Housley | # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with … # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? There is support in the LAMPS WG for this document. It eliminates the vulnerabilities like [CVE-2023-0464] and [CVE-2023-23524]. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was little controversy, and suggested improvements were readily accepted by the authors. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one has threatened an appeal; however, one concern was raised during WG Last Call that should be highlighted. As written, this document is not stand alone. It makes changes to the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280. There is a concern that future updates to RFC 5280 will conflict with these updates. The person that raised these concerns would prefer an update to RFC 5280 that completely replaces Section 6 and is written as a set of editing instructions to be made against Section 6 of RFC 5280. The person that raised this concern was able to convince one other LAMPS WG participant, but the LAMPS WG Chairs determined that they were in the rough. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? There has been some code written, including at least one implementation of the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280 that was updated to the algorithm in this document. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No concerns about interaction with other technologies. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No special reviews are needed. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? This document does not include a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No formal language is used.. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? No concerns were noticed. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? As reflected in the Datatracker: Proposed Standard on the IETF Stream. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The authors have explicitly stated that he is unaware of any IPR that needs to be declared. A third part disclosure was made: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6053/. However, this seems to be related to getting time from GPS, which is not a topic discussed in the Internet-Draft. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) IDnits offers the following complaint: ~~~ The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. (See the Legal Provisions document at https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) ~~~ As an author of RFC 5280, I do not see how this concern applies to this update. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No concerns. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All references are freely available. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. There are no downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this document will not change the status of any other document. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No updates to any IANA registries are needed. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No new IANA registries are needed. |
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2023-12-08
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02 | Russ Housley | # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with … # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? There is support in the LAMPS WG for this document. It eliminates the vulnerabilities like [CVE-2023-0464] and [CVE-2023-23524]. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was little controversy, and suggested improvements were readily accepted by the authors. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one has threatened an appeal; however, one concern was raised during WG Last Call that should be highlighted. As written, this document is not stand alone. It makes changes to the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280. There is a concern that future updates to RFC 5280 will conflict with these updates. The peron raising these concerns would prefer an update to RFC 5280 that completely replaces Section 6. The person that raised this concern was able to convince one other LAMPS WG participant, but the LAMPS WG Chairs determined that they were in the rough. Would future changes to this document do a cut and paste to this document or to RFC5280? Once you've accepted that cut and paste is a thing, why wouldn't you accept it downstream? How many levels are acceptable? How do you deal with dueling cut and pastes? In any event, this isn't a technical argument, and it might be useful to have a discussion with the RSCE and the RPC on RFC style. Please include my objections in the write up you send to the ADs and IESG. Happy to write a paragraph if you need a summary. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? There has been some code written, including at least one implementation of the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280 that was updated to the algorithm in this document. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No concerns about interaction with other technologies. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No special reviews are needed. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? This document does not include a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No formal language is used.. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? No concerns were noticed. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? As reflected in the Datatracker: Proposed Standard on the IETF Stream. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The authors have explicitly stated that he is unaware of any IPR that needs to be declared. A third part disclosure was made: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6053/. However, this seems to be related to getting time from GPS, which is not a topic discussed in the Internet-Draft. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) IDnits offers the following complaint: ~~~ The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. (See the Legal Provisions document at https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) ~~~ As an author of RFC 5280, I do not see how this concern applies to this update. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No concerns. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All references are freely available. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. There are no downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this document will not change the status of any other document. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No updates to any IANA registries are needed. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No new IANA registries are needed. |
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2023-12-08
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02 | Russ Housley | # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with … # Shepherd Write-up for draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? There is support in the LAMPS WG for this document. It eliminates the vulnerabilities like [CVE-2023-0464] and [CVE-2023-23524]. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was little controversy, and suggested improvements were readily accepted by the authors. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one has threatened an appeal. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? There has been some code written, including at least one implementation of the certification path validation algorithm in RFC 5280 that was updated to the algorithm in this document. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No concerns about interaction with other technologies. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No special reviews are needed. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? This document does not include a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No formal language is used.. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? No concerns were noticed. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? As reflected in the Datatracker: Proposed Standard on the IETF Stream. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The authors have explicitly stated that he is unaware of any IPR that needs to be declared. A third part disclosure was made: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6053/. However, this seems to be related to getting time from GPS, which is not a topic discussed in the Internet-Draft. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) IDnits offers the following complaint: ~~~ The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. (See the Legal Provisions document at https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) ~~~ As an author of RFC 5280, I do not see how this concern applies to this update. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No concerns. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All references are freely available. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. There are no downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this document will not change the status of any other document. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No updates to any IANA registries are needed. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No new IANA registries are needed. |
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2023-12-07
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02 | Russ Housley | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call |
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2023-11-21
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02 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-02.txt |
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2023-11-21
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02 | David Benjamin | New version approved |
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2023-11-21
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02 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: David Benjamin |
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2023-11-21
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02 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |
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2023-11-16
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01 | Russ Housley | Notification list changed to housley@vigilsec.com |
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2023-11-16
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01 | Russ Housley | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
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2023-11-16
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01 | Russ Housley | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document |
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2023-07-06
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01 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-01.txt |
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2023-07-06
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01 | David Benjamin | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: David Benjamin) |
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2023-07-06
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01 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |
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2023-07-05
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00 | David Benjamin | This document now replaces draft-davidben-x509-policy-graph instead of None |
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2023-07-05
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00 | David Benjamin | New version available: draft-ietf-lamps-x509-policy-graph-00.txt |
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2023-07-05
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00 | David Benjamin | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: David Benjamin) |
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2023-07-05
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00 | David Benjamin | Uploaded new revision |