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NFS Version 4.0 Trunking Update
draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-05

Yes

(Spencer Dawkins)

No Objection

(Adam Roach)
(Alexey Melnikov)
(Alvaro Retana)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Mirja Kühlewind)
(Suresh Krishnan)
(Terry Manderson)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 03 and is now closed.

Warren Kumari
No Objection
Comment (2019-01-08 for -03) Sent
Thank you for this document, and special thanks to Shwetha Bhandari for the OpsDir review.
Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -03) Unknown

                            
Adam Roach Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent

                            
Alexey Melnikov Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent

                            
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent

                            
Ben Campbell Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (2019-01-09 for -03) Sent
General: I don't expect a change in approach this late in the process, but I think the approach of this update (replacing, inserting, and updating sections in the updated RFC) is pretty unfriendly to the readers. This would make sense if we actually rendered patched versions of updated RFCs, but we do not. This leaves readers to flip back and forth to figure out the context of each update. 

§1: s/"which enables"/"that enables"

§5.1 Does "updated introduction" to section 8.4 mean the same as "replaces section 8.4, but not it's subsections?"

§5.2.2 (and other sections that add a new subsection to 8.4). Are these assumed to be inserted in a particular location under 8.4? That is, can you state the new section numbers? Otherwise the reader is left to guess where these would be inserted.

§6: What is meant by "outside section 8"?
Benjamin Kaduk Former IESG member
(was Discuss) No Objection
No Objection (2019-02-01 for -04) Sent for earlier
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS points!
Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent

                            
Mirja Kühlewind Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent

                            
Suresh Krishnan Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Sent

                            
Terry Manderson Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -03) Not sent