Export of MPLS Segment Routing Label Type Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-11
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2021-09-29
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2021-09-29
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11 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
2021-09-29
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11 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2021-09-29
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11 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2021-09-29
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11 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2021-09-29
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11 | Cindy Morgan | IESG has approved the document |
2021-09-29
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11 | Cindy Morgan | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2021-09-29
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11 | Robert Wilton | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
2021-09-29
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11 | Robert Wilton | Ballot approval text was generated |
2021-09-21
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11 | Luc André Burdet | Request closed, assignment withdrawn: Lou Berger Last Call RTGDIR review |
2021-09-21
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11 | Luc André Burdet | Closed request for Last Call review by RTGDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events': Has moved forward without rtgdir review. Currently Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
2021-09-17
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11 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-11.txt |
2021-09-17
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11 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-09-17
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11 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-09-17
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11 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-09-09
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10 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2021-09-09
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10 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation |
2021-09-09
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10 | Michelle Cotton | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2021-09-09
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10 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] Nice work on the shepherd writeup. This was the only working group document on this week's IESG telechat, which is remarkable. It can … [Ballot comment] Nice work on the shepherd writeup. This was the only working group document on this week's IESG telechat, which is remarkable. It can truly be said that it got thorough IESG review. |
2021-09-09
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10 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
2021-09-09
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10 | Jean Mahoney | Closed request for Last Call review by GENART with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2021-09-09
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10 | Jean Mahoney | Assignment of request for Last Call review by GENART to Fernando Gont was marked no-response |
2021-09-09
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10 | Francesca Palombini | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Francesca Palombini |
2021-09-09
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10 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-10.txt |
2021-09-09
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10 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-09-08
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10 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-09-08
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10 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-09-08
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09 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed |
2021-09-08
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09 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-09.txt |
2021-09-08
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09 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-09-08
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09 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-09-08
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09 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-09-08
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08 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Warren Kumari |
2021-09-08
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08 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Hilarie Orman for the SECDIR review. |
2021-09-08
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08 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
2021-09-08
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08 | Benjamin Kaduk | [Ballot comment] This document presents a couple use cases for the new IE 46 codepoints, but both are in the context of monitoring the rollout … [Ballot comment] This document presents a couple use cases for the new IE 46 codepoints, but both are in the context of monitoring the rollout of a migration of control-plane technology. Are there steady-state use cases for these values? Section 2 Another use case is to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from dynamic BGP labels [RFC8277] to BGP Prefix-SIDs in the context of Seamless MPLS SR described in Section 4.6 of [I-D.hegde-spring-mpls-seamless-sr]. I'm not sure that draft-hegde-spring-mpls-seamless-sr is at a state of maturity to be a good reference here (and thus, that this example is worth including). For example, the referenced section refers to "option A", "option B", and "option C" but I couldn't find where in the document these options were enumerated as such. (Maybe it's supposed to be what's described in sections 4.1.{1,2,3}; maybe not.) (Further aside about that draft: it also isn't using the RFC 8174 version of the BCP 14 boilerplate, and has more authors than recommended by the RFC Series Editor statement on authorship, https://www.rfc-editor.org/pipermail/rfc-interest/2015-May/008869.html .) Section 5 If pressed to come up with new security considerations from this work, I would submit that conveying information about what control-plane protocol is in use gives an attacker information to use in planning an attack on that control plane. But the attacker would need to have access to the IPFIX information in order to do so, and RFCs 7012 and 7011 are clear that the mechanism for conveying the IPFIX data has to provide confidentiality protection, so it seems that endpoint compromise would be needed for the attacker to actually gain access, and it's hard to come up with a realistic scenario involving endpoint compromise where these new codepoints are key to an attack. In short, it doesn't really seem like a consideration that's relevant enough to be worth mentioning in this document, so I'm okay with leaving this section as-is. The most that I would suggest changing is to add the word "significant", for "no significant extra security considerations". NITS Section 1 Four new routing protocol extensions, OSPFv2 Extensions [RFC8665], I suggest dropping the word "new", which is a relative term and will be less and less applicable over time. Also, [I-D.ali-spring-sr-traffic-accounting] describes how IP Flow Information Export [RFC7012] can be leveraged to account traffic to MPLS SR label dimensions within a Segment Routing domain. I don't understand the word "dimensions" in this context. (It doesn't appear in the referenced documents, either, which suggests that a different word may have been intended.) |
2021-09-08
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08 | Benjamin Kaduk | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Benjamin Kaduk |
2021-09-08
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08 | Martin Vigoureux | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Martin Vigoureux |
2021-09-07
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08 | Erik Kline | [Ballot comment] [abstract, nit] * "protocol used" -> "protocol is used", or "protocol is in use" (as in section 2) |
2021-09-07
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08 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2021-09-07
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08 | Martin Duke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Martin Duke |
2021-09-07
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08 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2021-09-06
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08 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot comment] Thank you for the work put into this document. I have only one suggestion: expand "IE" on the first use. Special thanks to … [Ballot comment] Thank you for the work put into this document. I have only one suggestion: expand "IE" on the first use. Special thanks to Med Boucadair for his detailed shepherd's write-up notably about the WG consensus. I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric |
2021-09-06
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08 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Éric Vyncke |
2021-09-06
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08 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Lars Eggert |
2021-09-05
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08 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for John Scudder |
2021-09-03
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08 | Alvaro Retana | [Ballot comment] (1) The SR labels can also be programmed by a PCE (rfc8664). For completeness, it would be very nice if a … [Ballot comment] (1) The SR labels can also be programmed by a PCE (rfc8664). For completeness, it would be very nice if a codepoint was also allocated for that. (2) The "Additional Information" field in the IPFIX Information Elements registry includes information about mplsTopLabelType that will now be incomplete -- it currently says: See [RFC3031] for the MPLS label structure. See [RFC4364] for the association of MPLS labels with Virtual Private Networks (VPNs). See [RFC4271] for BGP and BGP routing. See [RFC5036] for Label Distribution Protocol (LDP). See the list of MPLS label types assigned by IANA at [http://www.iana.org/assignments/mpls-label-values]. It would be nice to add information here about the new fields. |
2021-09-03
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08 | Alvaro Retana | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alvaro Retana |
2021-09-02
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08 | Cindy Morgan | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2021-09-09 |
2021-09-02
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08 | Robert Wilton | Ballot has been issued |
2021-09-02
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08 | Robert Wilton | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Robert Wilton |
2021-09-02
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08 | Robert Wilton | Created "Approve" ballot |
2021-09-02
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08 | Robert Wilton | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for Writeup |
2021-09-02
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08 | Robert Wilton | Ballot writeup was changed |
2021-08-23
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08 | Sabrina Tanamal | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2021-08-21
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08 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA - Not OK |
2021-08-21
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08 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-08.txt |
2021-08-21
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08 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-08-21
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08 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-08-21
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08 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-08-06
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07 | Sabrina Tanamal | IANA Experts State changed to Expert Reviews OK from Reviews assigned |
2021-07-20
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07 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call |
2021-07-19
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07 | Sabrina Tanamal | IANA Experts State changed to Reviews assigned |
2021-07-19
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07 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Not OK from IANA - Review Needed |
2021-07-19
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07 | Sabrina Tanamal | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has completed its review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has completed its review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. The IANA Functions Operator understands that, upon approval of this document, there is a single action which we must complete. In the IPFIX Information Elements registry on the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) Entities registry page located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ For IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46), four new registrations are to be made as follows: Value: [ TBD-at-Registration ] Description: OSPFv2 Segment Routing Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] Value: [ TBD-at-Registration ] Description: OSPFv3 Segment Routing Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] Value: [ TBD-at-Registration ] Description: IS-IS Segment Routing Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] Value: [ TBD-at-Registration ] Description: BGP Segment Routing Prefix-SID Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] In section 3 of the current draft, the author provides "Additional Information" as part of the registrations. However, there is no such field in this subregistry. As a result, IANA requests that the author modify Section 3 to reflect this. "References" and "Requester" in the IPFIX Information Elements registry were just changed to "Additional Information" and "Reference". However, this change does not affect the IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46) registry. As this document requests registrations in an Expert Review (see RFC 8126) registry, we will initiate the required Expert Review via a separate request. This review must be completed before the document's IANA state can be changed to "IANA OK." The IANA Functions Operator understands that this is the only action required to be completed upon approval of this document. Note: The actions requested in this document will not be completed until the document has been approved for publication as an RFC. This message is meant only to confirm the list of actions that will be performed. Thank you, Sabrina Tanamal Senior IANA Services Specialist |
2021-07-19
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07 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Hilarie Orman. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2021-07-17
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07 | Mohamed Boucadair | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. Amanda (IANA) clarified that in the Information Elements registry, the name "Requester" in the "parent" registry was being used where IANA traditionally uses the label "Reference". In fact, the subregistries have always used the word "Reference". After receiving the author's request to add "Requester" to the subregistry to bring it in line with the parent registry, the decision was instead made to change "Requester" to "Reference" in the Information Elements registry and to rename that registry's "References" column "Additional Information". The confusion was introduced by IANA when instead of telling the author to remove the "Requester" column from the subregistry request, IANA told him to use "Additional Information" and "Reference", as if the request was about a request registration in the IE registry. The issue about the IANA request information was brought up during the IETF Last-Call. IANA clarified the issue root and that the extra column will be removed from the registration request. This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided. A forth column was added by the author as he was mistakenly informed by IANA that such column is hidden from the IE46 registry. The extra column need to be removed. (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-07-16
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07 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Hilarie Orman. |
2021-07-16
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07 | Mohamed Boucadair | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. The review revealed that "Requester" column is hidden in the IANA page; the content in "References" column should be in "Requester" column and vice versa. The IPFIX registry was updated with the following note added to that registry: The columns previously titled "References" and "Requester" have been renamed "Additional Information" and "Reference", respectively. It happened during the review that IANA mistook the requested subregistry entries for Information Elements entries and informed the author to use those IE-specific fields. This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided. A forth column was added by the author as he was mistakenly informed by IANA that such column is hidden from the IE46 registry. The extra column need to be removed. (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-07-15
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07 | Haomian Zheng | Request for Last Call review by RTGDIR is assigned to Lou Berger |
2021-07-15
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07 | Haomian Zheng | Request for Last Call review by RTGDIR is assigned to Lou Berger |
2021-07-08
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07 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Fernando Gont |
2021-07-08
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07 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Fernando Gont |
2021-07-08
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07 | Alvaro Retana | Requested Last Call review by RTGDIR |
2021-07-08
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07 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Hilarie Orman |
2021-07-08
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07 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Hilarie Orman |
2021-07-07
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07 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-07.txt |
2021-07-07
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07 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-07-07
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07 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-07-07
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07 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-07-07
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06 | Mohamed Boucadair | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). This is fixed as the IANA registry has two columns (one of them is hidden and has to be fixed, see below): "Requester" column and "References" column. o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. The review revealed that "Requester" column is hidden in the IANA page; the content in "References" column should be in "Requester" column and vice versa. As an outcome, the "References" column should be renamed to "Additional Information". Both IANA and IE doctors confirmed that IE46 registry will be fixed when making the actions that are requested by this I-D. The table in the "IANA Considerations" Section of this document will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". (01/07) The IANA added this note to https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml: || The columns previously titled "References" and "Requester" have been renamed || "Additional Information" and "Reference", respectively." This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided, including the hidden column (refer to the Working Group Summary). These actions are appropriately captured in the document. As indicated in the Working Group Summary, the table in the IANA Considerations section will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-07-06
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06 | Amy Vezza | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2021-07-06
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06 | Amy Vezza | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2021-07-20): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type@ietf.org, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com, opsawg-chairs@ietf.org, opsawg@ietf.org, rwilton@cisco.com … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2021-07-20): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type@ietf.org, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com, opsawg-chairs@ietf.org, opsawg@ietf.org, rwilton@cisco.com Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (Export of MPLS Segment Routing Label Type Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)) to Informational RFC The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'Export of MPLS Segment Routing Label Type Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)' as Informational RFC The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2021-07-20. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document introduces new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) code points to identify which traffic is being forwarded based on which MPLS control plane protocol used within a Segment Routing domain. In particular, this document defines four code points for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element for IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS Segment Routing extensions. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. |
2021-07-06
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06 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2021-07-06
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06 | Robert Wilton | Last call was requested |
2021-07-06
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06 | Robert Wilton | Ballot approval text was generated |
2021-07-06
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06 | Robert Wilton | Ballot writeup was generated |
2021-07-06
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06 | Robert Wilton | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2021-07-06
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06 | Robert Wilton | Last call announcement was generated |
2021-07-01
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06 | (System) | Changed action holders to Robert Wilton (IESG state changed) |
2021-07-01
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06 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed |
2021-07-01
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06 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06.txt |
2021-07-01
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06 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-07-01
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06 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-07-01
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06 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-07-01
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05 | (System) | Changed action holders to Robert Wilton, Thomas Graf (IESG state changed) |
2021-07-01
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05 | Robert Wilton | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from Publication Requested |
2021-06-29
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05 | Tianran Zhou | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). This is fixed as the IANA registry has two columns (one of them is hidden and has to be fixed, see below): "Requester" column and "References" column. o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. The review revealed that "Requester" column is hidden in the IANA page; the content in "References" column should be in "Requester" column and vice versa. As an outcome, the "References" column should be renamed to "Additional Information". Both IANA and IE doctors confirmed that IE46 registry will be fixed when making the actions that are requested by this I-D. The table in the "IANA Considerations" Section of this document will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided, including the hidden column (refer to the Working Group Summary). These actions are appropriately captured in the document. As indicated in the Working Group Summary, the table in the IANA Considerations section will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-06-29
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05 | Tianran Zhou | Responsible AD changed to Robert Wilton |
2021-06-29
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05 | Tianran Zhou | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up |
2021-06-29
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05 | Tianran Zhou | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2021-06-29
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05 | Tianran Zhou | IESG process started in state Publication Requested |
2021-06-26
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05 | Mohamed Boucadair | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). This is fixed as the IANA registry has two columns (one of them is hidden and has to be fixed, see below): "Requester" column and "References" column. o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. The review revealed that "Requester" column is hidden in the IANA page; the content in "References" column should be in "Requester" column and vice versa. As an outcome, the "References" column should be renamed to "Additional Information". Both IANA and IE doctors confirmed that IE46 registry will be fixed when making the actions that are requested by this I-D. The table in the "IANA Considerations" Section of this document will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided, including the hidden column (refer to the Working Group Summary). These actions are appropriately captured in the document. As indicated in the Working Group Summary, the table in the IANA Considerations section will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-06-26
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05 | Mohamed Boucadair | Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why … Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header? This document requests publication as an Informational RFC. That is indicated on the header page. The intended status is justified given that the document includes informative use cases to illustrate the use of the new types and it does not include any normative statements. Moreover, the registration policy for the target IANA registry (MPLS label types) is "Expert Review". Note that publishing this document as an RFC makes sense as RFC 7012 says the following: || "The specification of new MPLS label types MUST be published using a || well-established and persistent publication medium." (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: This document defines new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) types to identify which traffic is being forwarded based upon which MPLS control plane protocol within a Segment Routing (SR) domain. To that aim, the document registers four new types for the IPFIX mplsTopLabelType Information Element (#46): IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and BGP MPLS SR extensions. These new types can be used, for example, to monitor MPLS control plane migrations from LDP to IS-IS (or OSPF) Segment Routing. Other use cases are discussed in the document. Working Group Summary: This document ran 7 versions before adoption by opsawg. No major points of contention were encountered during the call for adoption based on -07, development, and WGLC. Note that a first attempt to adopt the work was made right after the adoption hum that occurred during the IETF#108 virtual meeting. That call was not conclusive as there was few support at the time. Prior to the adoption by opsawg, Thomas requested feedback from various WGs: o mpls wg: The main comment was related to the reference that is indicated in the IANA section (whether this should be this document or the document that defines the actual mechanism). This is fixed as the IANA registry has two columns (one of them is hidden and has to be fixed, see below): "Requester" column and "References" column. o lsr wg: The main comment was a suggestion to add a value for BGP Prefix-SID, which the author appropriately addressed. o spring wg: The main input was to consider separate values for OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. No objection to proceed with publication in opsawg. Thomas implemented the required changes to take into account the feedback received from these WGs, including comments from opsawg. An early version of the document was reviewed by IE doctors, Paul Aitken and Andrew Feren. The review revealed that "Requester" column is hidden in the IANA page; the content in "References" column should be in "Requester" column and vice versa. As an outcome, the "References" column should be renamed to "Additional Information". Both IANA and IE doctors confirmed that IE46 registry will be fixed when making the actions that are requested by this I-D. The table in the "IANA Considerations" Section of this document will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". This document focuses on MPLS-SR; SRv6-specific IEs are defined in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patki-srv6-ipfix. Document Quality: The document benefited from reviews from many WGs. These reviews helped to enhance the quality of the document. Personnel: The document shepherd is Mohamed Boucadair The Responsible Area Director is Robert Wilton (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. At least, two detailed reviews were made by the Document Shepherd: * WGLC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01-rev%20Med.pdf * Shepherd Review: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.pdf Also, the Document Shepherd shared comments for -07 as part of the WG Call for Adoption. The author has taken into account these various reviews. This version is ready for publication. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective. No. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? I used to have an issue with the Intended Status (Standards Track) of the document given that it does not include any normative statement and the IANA registration policy does not require a Standards Track RFC. After discussion with the WG and the author, it was decided to change the intended status to Informational as part of the Shepherd review. I have no concern with -05. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. The IPR response from the author can be seen at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/7m3sRo18BTmGwSC6RVBMoVB9LCg/ (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The consensus is solid. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. idnits is clean. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria No formal language is used. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are published RFCs. (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? No downrefs. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section. The document requests IANA to register four values in the "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" subregistry. The registry is well identified (a pointer is provided). The required information to proceed with the registrations is provided, including the hidden column (refer to the Working Group Summary). These actions are appropriately captured in the document. As indicated in the Working Group Summary, the table in the IANA Considerations section will be updated (by the author or RFC Editor) once the IANA registry is renamed from "References" to "Additional Information". (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language. N/A (20) If the document contains a YANG module N/A |
2021-06-26
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05 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05.txt |
2021-06-26
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05 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-06-26
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05 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-06-26
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05 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-06-26
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04 | Tianran Zhou | Intended Status changed to Informational from Proposed Standard |
2021-06-24
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04 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-04.txt |
2021-06-24
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04 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-06-24
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04 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-06-24
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04 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-06-23
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03 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-03.txt |
2021-06-23
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03 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-06-23
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-06-23
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03 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-06-22
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02 | Tianran Zhou | Notification list changed to mohamed.boucadair@orange.com because the document shepherd was set |
2021-06-22
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02 | Tianran Zhou | Document shepherd changed to Mohamed Boucadair |
2021-06-21
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02 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-02.txt |
2021-06-21
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02 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-06-21
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02 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-06-21
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02 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-06-21
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01 | Tianran Zhou | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from WG Document |
2021-06-21
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01 | Tianran Zhou | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2021-06-21
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01 | Tianran Zhou | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
2021-04-09
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01 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-01.txt |
2021-04-09
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01 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-04-09
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01 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Thomas Graf |
2021-04-09
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01 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |
2021-04-09
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00 | Tianran Zhou | This document now replaces draft-tgraf-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type instead of None |
2021-04-09
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00 | Thomas Graf | New version available: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-00.txt |
2021-04-09
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00 | (System) | WG -00 approved |
2021-04-08
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00 | Thomas Graf | Set submitter to "Thomas Graf ", replaces to draft-tgraf-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type and sent approval email to group chairs: opsawg-chairs@ietf.org |
2021-04-08
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00 | Thomas Graf | Uploaded new revision |