Telechat Review of draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-
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Document: draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-04

Reviewer: Christer Holmberg

Review Date: 7 May 2012

IETF LC End Date: 21 March 2012

IESG Telechat date: 10 May 2012

Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of editorial nits.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:



(The comments also applied to the -03 version, and I apologize for not bringing
them up when I reviewed that version.)

- General: G-ACh is mentioned throughout the document, but only in section 4 is
there a reference to RFC 5586. I suggest to add a reference on first occurrence
at least to section 1. It would probably be good also in section 3.



- Section 1: What is the purpose of the last paragraph, talking about IETF
Experts not agreeing? For someone who has not followed the work, it seems as
little strange.

- Section 3: The text says “The G-ACh Type assigned by this document”. I guess
it would be better to say e.g. “based on this document”.

Regards,

Christer