Last Call Review of draft-faltstrom-unicode11-08
review-faltstrom-unicode11-08-i18ndir-lc-asmus-2021-03-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-faltstrom-unicode11 |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Internationalization Directorate (i18ndir) | |
| Deadline | 2019-03-05 | |
| Requested | 2019-02-05 | |
| Authors | Patrik Fältström | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-04-01 (Latest revision 2019-03-11) | |
| Completed reviews |
I18ndir IETF Last Call review of -07
by Harald T. Alvestrand
(diff)
I18ndir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Asmus, Inc. Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Sam Weiler Genart Telechat review of -08 by Dan Romascanu |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Asmus, Inc. |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-faltstrom-unicode11 by Internationalization Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i18ndir/Dc3MwULdmdx5J6FocTyj4de9CBA | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-03-04 |
review-faltstrom-unicode11-08-i18ndir-lc-asmus-2021-03-04-00
(1) The math of code points needs to be reviewed in section 4.3. It appears to
not account for a property change for U+111C9
(2) In Section 5, there's a sentence that seems to have a sense destroying edit:
The code point if being accepted might due ???? to implementations of
IDNA2008 based on older versions of Unicode than 11.0.0 be rejected.
(3) plural noun/verb mismatch in section 6
... new versions [...] is...
(4) Section 8: use of definite article. Drop "the" in front of Unicode Version
(also check other instances)
(5) Usefully, the discussion of SHARADA SANDHI MARK could point out whether it
treated the same or different from other SANDHI marks in related scripts. (From
just looking at the tables, and not the original UCD entries, it looks like
that they are all now treated the same, which would be beneficial under the
"least astonishment" principle - or whatever it's called).
This review based primarily on the diff, with just some look at the full text
to get the complete context for some items.