Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-
review-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-10-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2012-10-09 | |
| Requested | 2012-09-20 | |
| Authors | Fabio Costa , Jean-Michel Combes , Xavier Pougnard , Li Hongyu | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2013-04-09) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -??
by Roni Even
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -?? by Carl Wallace |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Carl Wallace |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2012-10-11 |
review-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-10-11-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This draft is well-written and is ready with nits. There are some typos and minor editing needed in places. The draft may benefit from including some mention of issues like DoS or replay but a reference to RFC3756 is probably sufficient.