Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05
review-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2022-10-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2022-10-27 | |
| Requested | 2022-10-13 | |
| Authors | Mohit Sahni , Saurabh Tripathi | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-10-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Valery Smyslov (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ihMGS0Wl8sdlJlzkSZU-hlm7wRE | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2022-10-24 |
review-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2022-10-24-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2022-10-24 IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary:This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other comments than those on the list. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: [Page 7] Section 5, "In order to to"--->"In order to"