Telechat Review of draft-ietf-add-dnr-16
review-ietf-add-dnr-16-dnsdir-telechat-blacka-2023-04-27-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-add-dnr |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | DNS Directorate (dnsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2023-04-25 | |
| Requested | 2023-04-11 | |
| Authors | Mohamed Boucadair , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Dan Wing , Neil Cook , Tommy Jensen | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-11-06 (Latest revision 2023-04-27) | |
| Completed reviews |
Dnsdir Telechat review of -16
by David Blacka
Artart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Robert Sparks (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Joe Clarke (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Rich Salz (diff) Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by David Blacka (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Rich Salz (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | David Blacka |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-add-dnr by DNS Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/56TlV9iYcK2MdtlWam3HWYFP-pc | |
| Reviewed revision | 16 | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2023-04-27 |
review-ietf-add-dnr-16-dnsdir-telechat-blacka-2023-04-27-00
This is a followup review of version -16 of the I-D. The initial review was for -15. The primary advice (which was to add some terms to the Terminology section) was followed, and the additions are both appreciated and are concisely and clearly written. I also had some language nits, and a number of them were addressed. The nits that were not addressed were explicitly rejected by the editor. I don't feel very strongly about them, so I am happy to defer to the editors.