Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
review-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-12
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Geoff Huston (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Fred Baker
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Catherine Meadows
Review State Completed
Reviewer Dan Romascanu
Review review-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/K1VKWrWfJwWlur4luwtxqLUYRrI
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-12-05
Review completed: 2017-12-05

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2017-12-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: Ready

This document describes an ANIMA solution for IPv6 prefix management at the edge of large-scale ISP networks sketches an IPv4 solution extension to support IPv4 prefixes. It is well written, targeting the operators of ISP networks, describes the solution in a manner very clear for people familiar with the ANI framework, with useful deployment examples. A few minor issues and nits that were raised in my initial reviews were clarified, the majority of them by text changes. 

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