Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
review-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-12-12 | |
| Requested | 2017-11-12 | |
| Authors | Sheng Jiang , Zongpeng Du , Brian E. Carpenter , Qiong Sun | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-12-05 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Dan Romascanu
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Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Geoff Huston (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Fred Baker (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Catherine Meadows (diff) Genart Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2017-12-05 |
review-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2017-12-05 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12 IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14 Summary: Ready This document describes an ANIMA solution for IPv6 prefix management at the edge of large-scale ISP networks sketches an IPv4 solution extension to support IPv4 prefixes. It is well written, targeting the operators of ISP networks, describes the solution in a manner very clear for people familiar with the ANI framework, with useful deployment examples. A few minor issues and nits that were raised in my initial reviews were clarified, the majority of them by text changes. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: