Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03
review-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-03-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-03-06 | |
| Requested | 2013-02-21 | |
| Authors | Peter Saint-Andre | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-03-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Charlie Kaufman (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2013-03-08 |
review-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-03-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-03-06 IETF LC End Date: 2013-03-06 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: [Page 1] please consider spelling out "URI" in the abstract as in "uniform resource identifier (URI)" [Page 3] paragraph 4, "method for deferencing", do you mean "dereferencing" ? [Page 5] Section 5, "..access to personally identifying information..", do you mean "..access to identifiable personal information" ? Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com