Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14
review-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2014-09-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-09-11
Requested 2014-09-01
Authors David McGrew , Kevin Igoe
I-D last updated 2014-09-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -14 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Matt Lepinski (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Kiran K. Chittimaneni (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Kiran K. Chittimaneni
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Has nits
Completed 2014-09-12
review-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2014-09-12-00
Hi,

As a member of the Operations Directorate, I have reviewed the
following draft for its operational impact. These comments have been
written primarily for the benefit of the operations area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments. I hope these comments are clear and
useful.

AES-GCM and AES-CCM Authenticated Encryption in Secure RTP (SRTP)
Intended Status: Standards Track


http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14



This document defines how AES-GCM and AES-CCM Authenticated Encryption
with Associated Data algorithms can be used to provide confidentiality
and data authentication in the SRTP protocol.

I feel that this document is well written and ready. I just have one
minor suggestion.

Section 13.2., second sentence, just to be consistent with the rest of
the document, replace ‘Block Chaining Message' with 'Block
Chaining-Message'

Regards,
KK