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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-13
Requested 2015-07-30
Authors Bo Burman , Azam Akram , Roni Even , Magnus Westerlund
Draft last updated 2015-08-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-13
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2015-08-13
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-13-00

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Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-08-13

IETF LC End Date:  2015-08-13

IESG Telechat date: NA





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC; I have some
editorial comments.







Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:



-[Page 4], "which either uses"---->"which either use"



-[Page 5], Section 2.1 some of the terms are never used in the draft like 3GPP,
BGW, MTU, SGW, TCP, LTE...



-[Page 11], "include CSRC in it's stream "---->"include CSRC in its stream"



-[Page 18], "with first hand information"---->"with firsthand information"



-[Page 21], Figure 4 caption would be clearer to say if it applies to sender 
e.g. "RTP Pause States in Sender"



-[Page 50], "SRTP is the the most"---->"SRTP is the most"







Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

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www.ericsson.com