Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-08-13 | |
| Requested | 2015-07-30 | |
| Authors | Bo Burman , Azam Akram , Roni Even , Magnus Westerlund | |
| I-D last updated | 2020-01-21 (Latest revision 2015-09-11) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2015-08-13 |
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-13-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-08-13 IETF LC End Date: 2015-08-13 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC; I have some editorial comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], "which either uses"---->"which either use" -[Page 5], Section 2.1 some of the terms are never used in the draft like 3GPP, BGW, MTU, SGW, TCP, LTE... -[Page 11], "include CSRC in it's stream "---->"include CSRC in its stream" -[Page 18], "with first hand information"---->"with firsthand information" -[Page 21], Figure 4 caption would be clearer to say if it applies to sender e.g. "RTP Pause States in Sender" -[Page 50], "SRTP is the the most"---->"SRTP is the most" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com