Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05
review-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05-genart-lc-dupont-2016-03-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-03-18
Requested 2016-03-10
Authors Magnus Westerlund , Bo Burman , Roni Even , Mo Zanaty
I-D last updated 2016-08-31 (Latest revision 2016-06-10)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Sam Weiler (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-03-24
review-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05-genart-lc-dupont-2016-03-24-00
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Document: draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160319
IETF LC End Date: 20160318
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
Spelling:
 - ToC page 2 and 7 page 13: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 4.2.1 page 7, 4.2.5 page 9 and 4.2.6 page 10: i.e. -> i.e.,

 - 7 page 13: suggestions; -> suggestions:

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr