Last Call Review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-
review-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-genart-lc-even-2012-03-14-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-03-23 | |
| Requested | 2012-03-09 | |
| Authors | Jouni Korhonen , Teemu Savolainen | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2012-03-08) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -??
by Roni Even
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -?? by Alexey Melnikov Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Haibin Song |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Completed | 2012-03-14 |
review-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-genart-lc-even-2012-03-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012–3–13 IETF LC End Date: 2012–3–22 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 5.1.1 third paragraph change to “provided by some”