Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10-genart-lc-even-2017-03-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-10
Requested 2017-02-24
Authors Sami Boutros , Ali Sajassi , Samer Salam , John Drake , Jorge Rabadan
I-D last updated 2022-05-27 (Latest revision 2017-05-15)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Matthew A. Miller (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-03-06
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10-genart-lc-even-2017-03-06-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-03-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13

Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In general lack some abbreviations expansions. just a few

1. In the abstract EVPN and PW
2. ASBR
3. In section 2 the reference to RFC7432 is not a link in the HTML and PDF. The
link is working in the other places the reference appears.