Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10-genart-lc-even-2017-03-06-00

Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Title Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10
Request Last Call - requested 2017-02-24
Reviewer Roni Even
Review result Ready with Nits
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/2ZRzPI8Hoq8nnSO7P3sOky7LZjc
Last updated 2017-03-06

Review
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10-genart-lc-even-2017-03-06

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-03-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13

Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
In general lack some abbreviations expansions. just a few

1. In the abstract EVPN and PW
2. ASBR
3. In section 2 the reference to RFC7432 is not a link in the HTML and PDF. The link is working in the other places the reference appears.