Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-05-03
Requested 2016-04-12
Authors Sam Aldrin , Carlos Pignataro , Greg Mirsky , Nagendra Kumar Nainar
I-D last updated 2016-04-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -05 by Benoît Claise (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dale R. Worley
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-04-28
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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06
Reviewer: Dale R. Worley
Review Date: 2016-04-28
IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-05

Summary:  Ready.  Thanks for the thorough reworking of section 2,
which makes clear the way that SBFD is organized, and forms the
context within which the use cases are described.  Also, many nits
were fixed.  There are still some wording problems, but the RFC Editor
can help clean those up.

Dale