Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06
review-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06-genart-telechat-worley-2016-04-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-05-03
Requested 2016-04-12
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dale Worley (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Dale Worley
Review review-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06-genart-telechat-worley-2016-04-28
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg13209.html
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2016-04-28
Review completed: 2016-04-28

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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case-06
Reviewer: Dale R. Worley
Review Date: 2016-04-28
IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-05

Summary:  Ready.  Thanks for the thorough reworking of section 2,
which makes clear the way that SBFD is organized, and forms the
context within which the use cases are described.  Also, many nits
were fixed.  There are still some wording problems, but the RFC Editor
can help clean those up.

Dale