Telechat Review of draft-ietf-calext-jscontact-profiles-11
review-ietf-calext-jscontact-profiles-11-artart-telechat-kyzivat-2026-01-31-00

Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review result: Ready with Issues

I am the assigned ARTART reviewer for this Internet-Draft.

Document: draft-ietf-calext-jscontact-profiles-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2026-01-31
IETF LC End Date: 2025-11-25
IESG Telechat date: 2026-02-03

Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described 
in the review.

This document has resolved most of the issues I raised on the -09 
version for Last Call. One of those was a NIT: long lines. This too has 
been resolved. But the resolution has raised another issue.

The long lines were in Table 1, in an example of how to define the 
properties of a profile. In version -09 the table had columns to define 
all possible profile properties that might need to be specified. This 
yielded a table wider that the maximum RFC line length. Version -11 has 
"solved" this by removing a column that was not needed for this specific 
example.

While this solved the problem for this example, it doesn't solve the 
problem for someone who wants to register a profile that needs all the 
columns. It seems unwise to leave it to future registrants to devise a 
solution.

I suggest that this document expand its example to include all the 
possible profile properties, and specify a suitable way to document them 
for a registration.