Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cbor-edn-literals-09
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Request Review of draft-ietf-cbor-edn-literals
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-06-05
Requested 2024-05-22
Authors Carsten Bormann
I-D last updated 2024-05-25
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-05-25
review-ietf-cbor-edn-literals-09-genart-lc-halpern-2024-05-25-00
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Document: draft-ietf-cbor-edn-literals-09
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2024-05-25
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
   There is one NIT noted below.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    It would be helpful if section 4.2 (IANA Considerations creating the
    Encoding Indications registry) said it was recording the assignments made
    in RFC 8949 section 8.1, and adding the _i indication.  It would also be
    helpful if that sentence noted that _i is defined in the ABNF appendix, as
    otherwise the reader is left going "what is this and where did it come
    from?"