Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-05
review-ietf-detnet-ip-05-genart-lc-even-2020-03-09-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-detnet-ip |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2020-03-13 | |
| Requested | 2020-02-28 | |
| Authors | Balazs Varga , János Farkas , Lou Berger , Don Fedyk , Stewart Bryant | |
| I-D last updated | 2020-03-09 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -04
by Stig Venaas
(diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Bob Briscoe (diff) Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-ip by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Jp4uCLyCZxJk-papEKhqDxU8tJ8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2020-03-09 |
review-ietf-detnet-ip-05-genart-lc-even-2020-03-09-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2020-03-09 IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3 the paragraph before the last one " the appropriate DetNet flow-specific information and ensures that the receives the proper traffic treatment within the domain", looks to me that it should be "that the flow receives ..." 2. In section 6 I could not parse the second level bullet "When the DSCP field is used in flow identification, a list of field values that may be used by a specific flow."