Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-05
review-ietf-detnet-ip-05-genart-lc-even-2020-03-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-03-13
Requested 2020-02-28
Authors Balazs Varga, János Farkas, Lou Berger, Don Fedyk, Stewart Bryant
Draft last updated 2020-03-09
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Bob Briscoe (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-ip-05-genart-lc-even-2020-03-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Jp4uCLyCZxJk-papEKhqDxU8tJ8
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2020-03-09

Review
review-ietf-detnet-ip-05-genart-lc-even-2020-03-09

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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-03-09
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. In section 3 the paragraph before the last one " the appropriate DetNet flow-specific information and ensures that the receives the proper traffic treatment within the domain", looks to me that it should be "that the flow receives ..."

2.  In section 6  I could not parse the second level bullet "When the DSCP field is used in flow identification, a list of field values that may be used by a specific flow."