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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12
review-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12-opsdir-telechat-qu-2024-02-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-02-13
Requested 2024-02-05
Authors Greg Mirsky , Mach Chen , David L. Black
I-D last updated 2024-02-13
Completed reviews Opsdir Telechat review of -12 by Yingzhen Qu (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -10 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Yingzhen Qu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Yingzhen Qu
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/jRE-ZcC3WEm2H0za0LFki_Fca5g
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-02-13
review-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12-opsdir-telechat-qu-2024-02-13-00
I've reviewed version 10, and this is a follow up review.

Thanks to the authors for working on this document and addressing my comments.

The document readability has improved a lot from my last review of version -10,
and I believe it is ready for publication.

There are a couple of nits for the authors to consider.

The line numbers are generated using idnits.

160	   is being done by using the Internet Control Message Protocol (ICMP)

nits: there should be a "." in the end.

166	   traffic between DetNet nodes with IP DetNet traffic, e.g., ensure
167	   that such ICMP traffic uses the DetNet IP data plane in each node,

nits: somehow this sentence doesn't read well to me. "uses the DetNet IP
data plane" is not very clear to me, I think you're trying to say ICMP traffic
should go through the same path/interface as DetNet traffic, for example,
there is ECMP between two DetNet nodes.