Telechat Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12
review-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12-opsdir-telechat-qu-2024-02-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-02-13 | |
| Requested | 2024-02-05 | |
| Authors | Greg Mirsky , Mach Chen , David L. Black | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-10-28 (Latest revision 2024-02-14) | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Telechat review of -12
by Yingzhen Qu
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Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Yingzhen Qu (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Gyan Mishra (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Yingzhen Qu |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/jRE-ZcC3WEm2H0za0LFki_Fca5g | |
| Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2024-02-13 |
review-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-12-opsdir-telechat-qu-2024-02-13-00
I've reviewed version 10, and this is a follow up review. Thanks to the authors for working on this document and addressing my comments. The document readability has improved a lot from my last review of version -10, and I believe it is ready for publication. There are a couple of nits for the authors to consider. The line numbers are generated using idnits. 160 is being done by using the Internet Control Message Protocol (ICMP) nits: there should be a "." in the end. 166 traffic between DetNet nodes with IP DetNet traffic, e.g., ensure 167 that such ICMP traffic uses the DetNet IP data plane in each node, nits: somehow this sentence doesn't read well to me. "uses the DetNet IP data plane" is not very clear to me, I think you're trying to say ICMP traffic should go through the same path/interface as DetNet traffic, for example, there is ECMP between two DetNet nodes.