Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05
review-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2021-01-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-02-05
Requested 2021-01-22
Authors Balazs Varga, János Farkas, Andy Malis, Stewart Bryant, Don Fedyk
Draft last updated 2021-01-29
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2021-01-29
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/n_TVsz8wlWEwuJswY6UIfPz3tpM
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2021-01-29

Review
review-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2021-01-29

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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2021-01-29
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready to be published as a Proposed Standard. 

Generally, the I-D is quite heavy on acronyms, some of which I suspect 
comes with the domain the I-D targets.  While I suspect that most
readers versed in the area will not have any problems expanding the
acronyms, I just wanted to mention this for the authors to perhaps
do a once-over to see if any acronyms need expansion.  (I list a couple
in the Nits section.)

Major issues:  0

Minor issues:  0

Nits/editorial comments: 2

- Figure 2: - What is "Tnl"? (Tunnel?)
            - What does "AC" mean?
- IDnits is reporting a couple of unused references ([RFC5921] and
  [RFC8660]), and that draft-ietf-detnet-mpls has been published as
  RFC 8964.