Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16
review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 18) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-02-19 | |
| Requested | 2019-02-07 | |
| Authors | Alper Yegin, Danny Moses, Seil Jeon | |
| Draft last updated | 2019-02-17 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -14 by Brian Haberman
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Secdir Last Call review of -17 by Daniel Migault (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Éric Vyncke (diff) Genart Last Call review of -15 by Russ Housley (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -15 by Magnus Westerlund (diff) Rtgdir Telechat review of -15 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Daniel Migault (diff) Genart Telechat review of -16 by Russ Housley (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 16 (document currently at 18) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2019-02-17 |
Review
review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-02-17 IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-15 IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21 Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: None. Nits: In the Abstract: s/section 4 of [RFC7333]/RFC 7333/ (because references are not permitted in the Abstract). In Section 3.1, last paragraph: drop the '(' and ')'.