Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08
review-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08-genart-lc-yee-2024-04-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2024-04-26 | |
| Requested | 2024-04-12 | |
| Authors | Peter Thomassen , Nils Wisiol | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-07-16 (Latest revision 2024-05-28) | |
| Completed reviews |
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -08
by Scott Rose
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Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -08 by Benson Muite (diff) Dnsdir Early review of -05 by Scott Rose (diff) Secdir Early review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KP3LiBGl7wMdIE5lCmraJWeahDs | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2024-04-26 |
review-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08-genart-lc-yee-2024-04-26-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2024-04-26 IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-26 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is yet another method for bootstrapping DNSSEC so that a parent zone obtains the child zone DNS keys in a trusted manner. It deprecates the bootstrapping scheme from RFC 8078. There are a few nits in the document, but otherwise it appears fine. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: General: Add a comma after all occurrences of "i.e." and "e.g.". The current usage is inconsistent in the draft. Page 4, 1st full paragraph: change "in-bailick" to "in-bailiwick". Page 13, section 9: insert "and" before "Paul Hoffman".