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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08
review-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08-genart-lc-yee-2024-04-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-04-26
Requested 2024-04-12
Authors Peter Thomassen , Nils Wisiol
I-D last updated 2024-04-26
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by Scott Rose (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -08 by Benson Muite (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -05 by Scott Rose (diff)
Secdir Early review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KP3LiBGl7wMdIE5lCmraJWeahDs
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-04-26
review-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08-genart-lc-yee-2024-04-26-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2024-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is yet another method for bootstrapping DNSSEC so that a
parent zone obtains the child zone DNS keys in a trusted manner. It deprecates
the bootstrapping scheme from RFC 8078. There are a few nits in the document,
but otherwise it appears fine. [Ready with Nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

General: Add a comma after all occurrences of "i.e." and "e.g.". The current
usage is inconsistent in the draft.

Page 4, 1st full paragraph: change "in-bailick" to "in-bailiwick".

Page 13, section 9: insert "and" before "Paul Hoffman".