Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-10-12 | |
Requested | 2017-09-28 | |
Authors | Stuart Cheshire | |
I-D last updated | 2017-10-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Iotdir Last Call review of -07
by Ralph Droms
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joel Jaeggli (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Dan Harkins (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2017-10-07 |
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2017-10-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Given the confusion I experienced reading the early portions of the document, a reference at the end of the introduction to the domain discovery mechanisms may help readers.