Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-12
Requested 2017-09-28
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joel Jaeggli
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Dan Harkins
Review State Completed
Reviewer Joel Halpern
Review review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/FoI8OLTE4DEYUnocwxs7wOeDn2g
Reviewed rev. 07
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-10-07
Review closed: 2017-10-07

Review
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07

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Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: 
    Given the confusion I experienced reading the early portions of the document, a reference at the end of the introduction to the domain discovery mechanisms may help readers.