Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-12
Requested 2017-09-28
Authors Stuart Cheshire
I-D last updated 2020-06-22 (Latest revision 2019-03-24)
Completed reviews Iotdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Joel Jaeggli (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-10-07
review-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07-genart-lc-halpern-2017-10-07-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    Given the confusion I experienced reading the early portions of the
    document, a reference at the end of the introduction to the domain
    discovery mechanisms may help readers.