Last Call Review of draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5321bis-32
review-ietf-emailcore-rfc5321bis-32-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2024-10-25-00

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I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document is the underlying specification in electronic mail and its
movement across the internet.

I actually reviewed this document during the working group last call process,
and worked through several comments John L and John K addressed then.

I have been also following the DNSDIR review thread, and feel confident the are
addressing those issues to me satisfaction.

One Nit:

The acknowledgement section has this partial paragraph - some bad xml?

    chetti contributed an analysis that clarified the ABNF productions
    that implicitly reference other documents.