Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-07-18
Requested 2017-07-04
Draft last updated 2017-07-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Francis Dupont
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03-genart-lc-dupont-2017-07-11
Reviewed rev. 03
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-07-11


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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170710
IETF LC End Date: 20170718
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - 2 page 3 (twice) and 2.1 page 3: e.g. -> e.g.,