Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-04
Requested 2015-11-23
Authors Tim Bray
I-D last updated 2017-11-14 (Latest revision 2015-11-10)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Fred Baker
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-11-24
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
    An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 24-November-2015
IETF LC End Date: 4- December-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


    In the introduction, would it be more accurate to say that this is 


for use when the server operator has received and is complying with a 


legal demand ...?