Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-13
review-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-13-secdir-telechat-emery-2022-07-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2022-08-09
Requested 2022-07-14
Authors Christian Hopps
I-D last updated 2022-07-16
Completed reviews Tsvart Early review of -03 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -12 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Bo Wu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -13 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -13 by Bo Wu (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shawn M Emery
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/eiS6xFMIk_glI1xI9yEZln0val8
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 19)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-07-16
review-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-13-secdir-telechat-emery-2022-07-16-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This is a re-review from the last version (12) of the draft.

I agree with the updates and reads better from an already well written document.

Shawn.
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