Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-te-app-13
review-ietf-isis-te-app-13-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-05-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-te-app
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-05-29
Requested 2020-05-14
Authors Les Ginsberg, Peter Psenak, Stefano Previdi, Wim Henderickx, John Drake
Draft last updated 2020-05-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Bruno Decraene (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Bruno Decraene (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -13 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-isis-te-app-13-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-05-29
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/y6rO1PG_BP_EQ8fjiBv8ONIhuKg
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 19)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2020-05-29

Review
review-ietf-isis-te-app-13-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-05-29

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Document: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2020-05-29
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Not really my area of expertise, however, I did not spot any issues during the review. The document is ready for publication.

Major issues:

None.

Minor issues:

None.

Nits/editorial comments:

* There are spacing issues mostly with parenthesis in the text that the RFC editor likely takes care of.
* On line 165 SR is used without expanding it. The expansion is obvious but the RFC has both "Segment Routing" and "Shared Risk" used with SRxx..
* At least Section 5 has "is NOT" and "does NOT" emphasis used. I would use just "is not" and "does not", since those with "NOT" are not in listed in normal "Requirements Language".