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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-nhdp-olsrv2-tlv-extension-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-nhdp-olsrv2-tlv-extension
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-07
Requested 2014-01-31
Authors Christopher Dearlove , Thomas H. Clausen
I-D last updated 2014-02-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-nhdp-olsrv2-tlv-extension-01-genart-lc-carpenter-2014-02-04
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-02-04
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-nhdp-olsrv2-tlv-extension-01.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-07
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Summary:  Ready


This draft is well-written and clear.

It retro-fits extensibility to two existing specifications.
As an author of RFC 6709 I find this an interesting exercise. Do
the hints in

especially bullet 2?

Minor Issues:

It is highly unusual for a draft to formally update another draft
(draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2), even though the latter is approved and
in the RFC queue. If we were a rational organisation, that draft
would be updated before publication.

(The writeup actually says "The Optimized Link State Routing Protocol
version 2 (OLSRv2) has been published as Standards Track." but that is