Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic-

Request Review of draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-01
Requested 2011-11-01
Authors Vidya Narayanan, George Tsirtsis, Vincent Park, Kent Leung
Draft last updated 2011-11-03
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -?? by Vijay Gurbani
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic-genart-telechat-gurbani-2011-11-03
Review completed: 2011-11-03


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Document: draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-28-2011
IETF LC End Date: Nov-01-2011
IESG Telechat date: Nov-03-2011

Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 1
Nits/editorial comments: 1

Minor issues:

- S3.1: "According to this specification ...", I am not sure what "this"
 refers to?  Does it refer to draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic or does
 it, instead, refer to rfc5177 (which is the topic of discussion in the
 previous paragraph from where the above is quoted)?


- S3.2, third paragraph:
 s/a prefix it MUST/a prefix, it MUST/


- vijay
Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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