Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11
review-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11-genart-lc-dupont-2018-06-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-06-19 | |
| Requested | 2018-06-05 | |
| Authors | Sriganesh Kini , Kireeti Kompella , Siva Sivabalan , Stephane Litkowski , Rob Shakir , Jeff Tantsura | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-06-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08
by Daniele Ceccarelli
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Francis Dupont (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Joe Clarke (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-06-19 |
review-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11-genart-lc-dupont-2018-06-19-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180616 IETF LC End Date: 20180619 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 6 authors (formal limit is 5) - ToC page 2 and 11 page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements - 1 page 3: please introduce LSP and SR abbrevs (MPLS is well known so does not need to be introduced). Remember that Abstract and body are independent so not well known abbrevs should be intrduced at first use in both. - 1 page 3: perfom -> perform - 2 page 4: IMHO you should add LAG in the list (it makes 7.2.2.1 easier to follow). - 6 page 10: accomodate -> accommodate - 12 page 21: pelase check if Hendrickx is not Henderickx Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr PS: these points are very minor so don't fix them if you don't have another reason to update the I-D.