IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby-13
review-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby-13-yangdoctors-lc-bierman-2025-12-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | YANG Doctors (yangdoctors) | |
| Deadline | 2026-01-10 | |
| Requested | 2025-12-20 | |
| Requested by | Mahesh Jethanandani | |
| Authors | Zhuoyao Lin , Benoît Claise , Ignacio Dominguez Martinez-Casanueva | |
| I-D last updated | 2026-03-09 (Latest revision 2026-02-20) | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Early review of -07
by Andy Bierman
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Opsdir Early review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -13 by Andy Bierman (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -13 by Xiao Min (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Rich Salz (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -15 by Rich Salz (diff) |
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| Comments |
The YANG Doctor's review looked at -08 version of the draft. We are now at -13. It would not be a bad idea for Andy to take a quick pass at it. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Andy Bierman |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby by YANG Doctors Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/yang-doctors/nD1s4ZAJ5mcJTav4XescYOX9dgk | |
| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2025-12-24 |
review-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby-13-yangdoctors-lc-bierman-2025-12-24-00
Draft: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby-13.txt Module: ietf-yang-library-augmentedby Revision: 2025-05-28 Status: Ready with nits Issues: none Nits: 1) In the grouping description: s/Leaf-list of the augmentation used/Leaf-list of the augmentations used/ 2) same grouping "modify the conformance of the module." RFC 7950 does not describe augment in terms of conformance. Suggest: "modify the schema tree of the module." 3) cut-and-paste in 3 places The same normative description appears in 3 places: - augment "/yanglib:yang-library/yanglib:module-set/yanglib:module" - augment "/yanglib:modules-state/yanglib:module" - 4.2.1. The scope of augmented-by Suggest moving this text to the leaf-list description and not repeating it anywhere. 4) Security considerations Suggest mentioning that the security considerations in RFC 8525, sec. 6 apply here.