Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-entity-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-entity
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-09
Requested 2017-12-21
Authors Andy Bierman, Martin Björklund, Jie Dong, Dan Romascanu
Draft last updated 2018-01-11
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -07 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Shawn Emery (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-entity-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-01-11
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-01-11


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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-12-22
IETF LC End Date: NA
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-09

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track  RFC.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-Many occurrences : "an sensor"--->"a sensor"
-Although mentioned in Section 9, it would be good for context setting to also add similar text to Intro or Abstract Section:
The YANG modules specified in this document define a schema for data
   that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such
   as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040].


Best Regards,
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research