Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01
review-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01-genart-lc-halpern-2013-04-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-05-01 | |
| Requested | 2013-04-17 | |
| Authors | Jürgen Schönwälder | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-04-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
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Joel M. Halpern
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
| State | Completed | |
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review-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01-genart-lc-halpern-2013-04-20
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| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 03) | |
| Result | Almost Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-04-20 |
review-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01-genart-lc-halpern-2013-04-20-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01 Common YANG Data Types Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 19-April-2013 IETF LC End Date: 1-May-2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC Major issues: (The following may well be a non-issue.) In the revision of the ietf-inet-types, the patterns for the new ip4-address-no-zone and ipv6-address-no-zone are drastically simplified from the ipv4-address and ipv6-address patterns. The new ipv4-address-no-zone allows any sequence of decimal digits an periods, while the original was carefully defined as dotted quads of 0..255. Similarly, te ipv6-address-no-zone allows any arbitrary sequence of hex digits and colons. The original patterns were very careful to match rules for validity. Is there a reason for the change. Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: