IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-15
review-ietf-netmod-system-config-15-artart-lc-blanchet-2025-12-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-config
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 20)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2026-01-06
Requested 2025-12-16
Authors Qiufang Ma , Qin Wu , Chong Feng
I-D last updated 2026-01-30 (Latest revision 2026-01-28)
Completed reviews Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -06 by Michal Vaško (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -16 by Michal Vaško (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -16 by Luis M. Contreras (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -16 by Ines Robles (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -15 by Marc Blanchet (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -16 by Yaroslav Rosomakho (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -18 by Yaroslav Rosomakho (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Marc Blanchet
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-netmod-system-config by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/YUhzVmb1Ckztj1APUo6x4xTvyc8
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 20)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-12-26
review-ietf-netmod-system-config-15-artart-lc-blanchet-2025-12-26-00
I was assigned as ARTART reviewer for this draft. I'm not a Yang or network
management expert. I have not reviewed Yang and XML code. I found no issue with
this draft, apart from small nits/suggestions identified by <MB> below.

   Configuration in <system> is undeletable to clients (e.g., a list

<MB>s/is undeletable to/can not be deleted by/ ?</MB>
   entry can never be removed from <system> through protocol
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   ([RFC8808]).  If system initializes a value for a particular leaf

<MB>s/If system initializes/If the system initializes/ or If <system>
initializes ?</MB>

   which is overridden by the client with a different value in <running>