Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39
review-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39-secdir-lc-kumari-2015-12-10-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 41) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-12-09 | |
| Requested | 2015-11-26 | |
| Authors | Thomas Haynes | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-12-10 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -39
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -40 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -39 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Warren "Ace" Kumari |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 39 (document currently at 41) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-12-10 |
review-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39-secdir-lc-kumari-2015-12-10-00
Be ye not afraid... I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Version reviewed: draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39.txt - NFSv4 Minor Version 2 Protocol External Data Representation Standard (XDR) Description Summary: LGTM, Security AD attention not required. Detail: Well, this was an easy one. This is an XDR from draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-29. It says it is machine generated, and it extracts cleanly. I did *not* compare the structures to the underlying document. Security and IANA considerations are short and to the point: See the XXX Considerations section of [NFSv42].