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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 41)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2015-12-09
Requested 2015-11-26
Authors Thomas Haynes
I-D last updated 2015-12-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -39 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -40 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -39 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Warren "Ace" Kumari
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 39 (document currently at 41)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-12-10




I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's

ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the

IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the

security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat

these comments just like any other last call comments.

Version reviewed:

draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39.txt - NFSv4 Minor Version 2 Protocol
External Data Representation Standard

(XDR) Description


LGTM, Security AD attention




Well, this was an easy one.

This is an XDR from


It says it is machine generated, and it extracts cleanly.

I did *not* compare the structures to the underlying document.

Security and IANA considerations are short and to the point:

See the XXX Considerations section of [NFSv42].