Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03
review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03-genart-lc-gurbani-2019-12-17-00

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2019-12-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-25
IESG Telechat date: 2019-12-19

I have reviewed about 1/2 of the I-D, up to Section 12 (page 297).  I will
review the remaining 1/2 before the telchat, but I suspect that given my very
high level overview of the draft, my disposition will not change.

Summary:  This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.  In the
portion of the draft I reviewed, there are some minor nits that can easily be
fixed.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 4 ("Sn" means Section n):
1/ Appendix A: s/No correesponding explanation/No corresponding explanation/
2/ S1: s/authoritative complete/authoritatively complete/
3/ S1.7 (page 12): "associable" or "associated to"
4/ There are many long lines that go beyond 80 characters, see S1.9, the bullet
that starts with “o  Open files can be …”,   Table 1, S4.2.1, etc.

Thanks,

- vijay