Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-
review-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-secdir-telechat-schoenwaelder-2009-07-03-00

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

I have reviewed the -14 version of this document and suggested some
changes to the security considerations. This has been addressed and I
am fine with the content of the text now.

Two minor editorial nits in the new text:

Replace "MIB" with "MIB module" in the following two text fragments:

  by this MIB may result    -> by this MIB module may result
  MIB allows the discovery  -> MIB module allows the discovery

/js

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Juergen Schoenwaelder           Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH
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