Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-
review-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-secdir-telechat-schoenwaelder-2009-07-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2009-07-09
Requested 2009-06-25
Authors Dan Joyal, Vishwas Manral
Draft last updated 2009-07-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Jürgen Schönwälder
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Jürgen Schönwälder
Assignment Reviewer Jürgen Schönwälder
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-secdir-telechat-schoenwaelder-2009-07-03
Review completed: 2009-07-03

Review
review-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-secdir-telechat-schoenwaelder-2009-07-03

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

I have reviewed the -14 version of this document and suggested some
changes to the security considerations. This has been addressed and I
am fine with the content of the text now.

Two minor editorial nits in the new text:

Replace "MIB" with "MIB module" in the following two text fragments:

  by this MIB may result    -> by this MIB module may result
  MIB allows the discovery  -> MIB module allows the discovery

/js

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