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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying-09
review-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying-09-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2014-10-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-10-17
Requested 2014-10-09
Authors Manav Bhatia , Sam Hartman , Dacheng Zhang , Acee Lindem
I-D last updated 2014-10-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Shaun Cooley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 11)
Result Has nits
Completed 2014-10-16
review-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying-09-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2014-10-16-00

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing

effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments

were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other

last call comments.



I think the draft has described very clearly the new authentication sequence
number mechanism.

A few minor suggestions and questions:

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Section 4 OSPF packet key selection:

o



 is this “Key” same as the “Ko” defined by RFC5709? If yes, should add the
 reference.

o



Is this “Key” same as the "Key ID" in Figure 1?



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 Section 6:

o



There are three “keys”: Authentication Key, cryptographic Key, and
Protocol-Specific Authentication Key (Ks). Which one is used in the Key ID
field of
 Figure 1?

o







Cheers,



Linda Dunbar