Early Review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29
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Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 30)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-01-31
Requested 2023-12-29
Requested by Dhruv Dhody
Authors Aijun Wang , Boris Khasanov , Sheng Fang , Ren Tan , Chun Zhu
I-D last updated 2024-01-30
Completed reviews Opsdir Early review of -29 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Early review of -29 by Ned Smith (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -23 by Ines Robles (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip by Ops Directorate Assigned
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Reviewed revision 29 (document currently at 30)
Result Has nits
Completed 2024-01-30
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Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2024-01-30
Result: Has Nits

This Standards Track document defines the Path Computation Element Communication
Protocol (PCEP) extension for Central Control Dynamic Routing (CCDR) based 
applications in Native IP networks.

114: requireHs --> requires
127: nexthops --> next hops
464: lead --> leads
618: nexthop --> next hop 
702: soley --> solely 
845: multihop --> multi-hop 

There are many places that the "s" after the third person singular verbs are missing.