Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09
review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09-secdir-lc-wallace-2024-09-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-10-03 | |
| Requested | 2024-09-19 | |
| Authors | Cheng Li , Haomian Zheng , Stephane Litkowski | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-04-21 (Latest revision 2024-11-27) | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -09
by Ron Bonica
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Carl Wallace (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Tianran Zhou (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Carl Wallace |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/K08g019OH2CZKiZ0NbZbGTPW08k | |
| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2024-09-29 |
review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09-secdir-lc-wallace-2024-09-29-00
The draft is well-written and clear. One minor editorial nit, in the first sentence of section 2.1, change "is encoded" to "are encoded".