Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-13

Request Review of draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2015-04-07
Requested 2015-03-19
Authors Stefan Winter, Mike McCauley
Draft last updated 2015-04-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Brian Weis (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Weis (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Weis 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-13-secdir-telechat-weis-2015-04-02
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-04-02


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. 

Previously I reviewed draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-12, and while I didn’t have any particular issues with it there were some questions and suggestions for clarifying trust model. The current draft added some really valuable text and figures. I believe it is ready to be published.