Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-13
review-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-13-secdir-telechat-weis-2015-04-02-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-04-07 | |
| Requested | 2015-03-19 | |
| Authors | Stefan Winter , Mike McCauley | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-04-02 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -13
by Martin Thomson
(diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Brian Weis (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Weis (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian Weis |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-04-02 |
review-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-13-secdir-telechat-weis-2015-04-02-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Previously I reviewed draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-12, and while I didn’t have any particular issues with it there were some questions and suggestions for clarifying trust model. The current draft added some really valuable text and figures. I believe it is ready to be published. Brian