Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11
review-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11-genart-telechat-campbell-2014-07-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-25
Requested 2014-03-19
Authors Dr. Bernard D. Aboba , Jouni Malinen , Paul Congdon , Joseph A. Salowey , Mark Jones
I-D last updated 2014-07-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2014-07-17
review-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11-genart-telechat-campbell-2014-07-17-00
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send it.]

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Document: draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2014-03-25
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2014-03-17

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. All of my
previous comments have been addressed in correspondence.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

none

Nits/editorial comments:

-- While by no means a show stopper, I think it might be helpful to add a
little of the explanation that the authors offered in email to address my
original questions about sections 2.1 and 2.2.