Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04
review-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2021-10-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-10-27
Requested 2021-09-29
Authors Marc Blanchet
I-D last updated 2022-03-31 (Latest revision 2022-01-28)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Scott G. Kelly (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shwetha Bhandari
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/C3tGWEZMVzNRzjgckS2iIMu_t5E
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-10-26
review-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2021-10-26-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:
This is a RFC7484bis document - RFC7484 specification is currently a Proposed
Standard.  This is
 advancing to an Internet Standard via this draft.

There is a clean up of  Deployment and Implementation Considerations section in
comparison to RFC 7484 on how a RDAP client should handle queries not in the
cache which looks operationally fine and handles the reported errata. Hence no
new operational concerns.