Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2014-10-24 | |
Requested | 2014-10-12 | |
Authors | Randell Jesup , Salvatore Loreto , Michael Tüxen | |
I-D last updated | 2021-01-26 (Latest revision 2015-01-04) | |
Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08
by Alexey Melnikov
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Ron Bonica |
State | Completed | |
Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-10-24 |
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24-00
Folks Ready for publication: I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This draft is very well written and the protocol should work. Nits: Please run the nit-checker over this document to catch a few small issues (e.g., an obsoleted normative reference). Ron Bonica