Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-10-24
Requested 2014-10-12
Draft last updated 2014-10-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Paul Hoffman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-10-24

Review
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24

Folks

Ready for publication:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.  
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft is very well written and the protocol should work.

Nits: Please run the nit-checker over this document to catch a few small issues (e.g., an obsoleted normative reference).

Ron Bonica