Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-10-24
Requested 2014-10-12
Authors Randell Jesup , Salvatore Loreto , Michael Tüxen
I-D last updated 2021-01-26 (Latest revision 2015-01-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-10-24
review-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2014-10-24-00
Folks

Ready for publication:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

This draft is very well written and the protocol should work.

Nits: Please run the nit-checker over this document to catch a few small issues
(e.g., an obsoleted normative reference).

Ron Bonica