Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21
review-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21-dnsdir-lc-obser-2022-10-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 26) | |
Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
Team | DNS Directorate (dnsdir) | |
Deadline | 2022-10-12 | |
Requested | 2022-09-28 | |
Authors | Chris Wendt , Jon Peterson | |
I-D last updated | 2025-04-30 (Latest revision 2023-06-05) | |
Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -22
by Dale R. Worley
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Vincent Roca (diff) Artart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Harald T. Alvestrand (diff) Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Florian Obser (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -23 by Vincent Roca (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Florian Obser |
State | Completed | |
Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd by DNS Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/Fv-pKTtPyHLVXYDD2phBfvab9nc | |
Reviewed revision | 21 (document currently at 26) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2022-10-12 |
review-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21-dnsdir-lc-obser-2022-10-12-00
I'm the assigned reviewer of the DNS Directorate for this draft. This document does not reference the DNS, and has no considerations that reflect on the DNS. The reviewer is not familiar with PASSporT and is not in a position to make qualified comment on the topic. That being said, this specification to add signed and integrity protected rich call data is clearly motivated and the proposed extension is clearly expressed. A list of nits follows. Page 5: 3 times: s/passport/PASSporT/ Page 13: s/contraint/constraint/ Page 15: This document defines a new JSON Web Token claim for "crn", Call Reason, the value of which is a single string that can contains information as defined in ... that can contain Page 20 s/consisent/consistent/ Page 22 s/PASSport/PASSporT/ Page 25 s/PASSport/PASSporT/ Page 26 s/cooresponding/corresponding/ Page 29 s/availbility/availability/