Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21
review-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21-dnsdir-lc-obser-2022-10-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type Last Call Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2022-10-12
Requested 2022-09-28
Authors Chris Wendt , Jon Peterson
I-D last updated 2022-10-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -22 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -21 by Harald T. Alvestrand (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -21 by Florian Obser (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -23 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Florian Obser
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/Fv-pKTtPyHLVXYDD2phBfvab9nc
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-10-12
review-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21-dnsdir-lc-obser-2022-10-12-00
I'm the assigned reviewer of the DNS Directorate for this draft.
This document does not reference the DNS, and has no considerations
that reflect on the DNS.

The reviewer is not familiar with PASSporT and is not in a position to
make qualified comment on the topic.
That being said, this specification to add signed and integrity
protected rich call data is clearly motivated and the proposed
extension is clearly expressed.

A list of nits follows.

Page 5:
3 times: s/passport/PASSporT/

Page 13:
s/contraint/constraint/

Page 15:

   This document defines a new JSON Web Token claim for "crn", Call
   Reason, the value of which is a single string that can contains
   information as defined in

... that can contain


Page 20
s/consisent/consistent/

Page 22
s/PASSport/PASSporT/

Page 25
s/PASSport/PASSporT/

Page 26
s/cooresponding/corresponding/

Page 29
s/availbility/availability/