Telechat Review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
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Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-04-17
Requested 2018-03-21
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Reviewer Brian Carpenter
Review review-ietf-stir-rph-03-genart-telechat-carpenter-2018-04-02
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Draft last updated 2018-04-02
Review completed: 2018-04-02

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-stir-rph-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2018-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-06
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19

Summary: Ready
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Comments:
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This is a well written draft and I have no technical comments.

The draft says it extends RFC8225. Some people would say that needs
an Updates: 8225 header.

Nits:
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8.1.  Normative References

   [I-D.ietf-stir-passport]
              Wendt, C. and J. Peterson, "Personal Assertion Token
              (PASSporT)", February 2017.

Is now RFC8225.

   [I-D.ietf-stir-rfc4474bis]
              Peterson, J., Jennings, C., Rescorla, E., and C. Wendt,
              "Authenticated Identity Management in the Session
              Initiation Protocol (SIP)", February 2017.

Is now RFC8224.